Last Bit of Ancient Bits
So here are the last two things I am posting from my early days of writing. The rest of the poetry and the like from then will probably never surface here, but then again I stomached what little pride I had to post this as well. This is about 6-7 years old now, if not a little older.
“Knowledge”
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A Bit of Bard-Work
I wrote this a long time ago. The website that hosted these no longer exists, but I figured I’d throw up what I originally contributed. It’s just some short, quickly written, genre fantasy.
Written for PlanetADND.com
Unknown Date, Probably sometime in 2003
Hosted on site as “Combat Chaos: Story 38”
Arckes (stalker of Dacar) VS Pascal the Gnome
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Incarnate (An Old Short Story)
There was a contest a long while back that I wrote this for, but it was a high school contest, and I don’t think I ever entered the work. There are huge problems with the story, and it’s very broken up. Still, out of my earlier work this piece had a special place in my heart–I really felt like a writer putting it together. This is a lengthier post, but I think it’s kind of fun to read, either way. I don’t know that I would ever do anything with this, but I have considered what it might be like to do children’s books with these characters and change up the seriousness of the adventure. In this case, there were going to be younger teen characters but given circumstances would need to cope with the adult world (a more oppressive sci-fi one at that). In that respect, I guess it’s very young adult/teen fiction.
“Incarnate”
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“Firefight” illustrated
So, I did a comic version of that old poem “Firefight” around the time I wrote it. I thought it might be enjoyable to see some of my artwork because it was much better than the poetry (at least I think so).
First Flash Fiction
So, back in the day before I knew anything about flash fiction, I heard the basic premise (story < 500 words) and made my attempts. These first two were, as per all the old stuff I’m posting now, awful. You really need to read a lot of flash fiction I think to get a grasp on how it works. Fortunately, since then I have. I did lose my recent flash fiction work, so instead I thought I would post my painful memories.
“Curfew”
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Signs of Improvement
Digging through some files on my external HD, and I came across some really old writing (we’re talking end of middle school, start of high school). Needless to say, I liked to write, but I lacked direction. I would argue it wouldn’t be until my senior year of high school that I started to get a push in the right direction. Anyway, I hate seeing the crap I came from, but I thought others might get a good laugh. If nothing else, then you’ll believe improvement is possible. So the next couple of posts are basically martyrdom.
These first two are combat, final-showdown sort of poems. (Again, I ask only for forgiveness and understanding.)
“Firefight”
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NaNoWriMo 2007
So last year, I gave National Novel Writing Month a shot, but I fell far short of reaching the objective. This year, I am going to try again. Inspired by the works of James Joyce, especially Ulysses, I intend to write a modernist novel. The model will be something like Ulysses, but instead it will be more current and not necessarily follow a particular epic as a duality. This is going to be tough, as my previous attempt taught me. Still, I am truly looking forward to it.
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The Reading Habits of Royalty
What if Her Majesty, the Queen of England, discovered the bookmobile? This delightful soup question is answered in Alan Bennett’s novella, The Uncommon Reader. The premise may seem gimmicky, but in fact the book is delightfully clever. The work gives itself over to a seemingly unimportant possibility and effortlessly produces enjoyment and interest. The novella in its entirety can be conquered in an afternoon, numbering only 120 pages. Yet the pleasure and intrigue are lasting, making it certainly worth the while.
The mood of the book is very English, as it should be. The detail is scant, but it creates a definite mood that is remarkably crafted throughout the book. The content, including characters, setting, events, et cetera, all fit together in a very believable way, which adds to the quality of the humor. Jokes about what wins the public’s heart in a novel, or how to select a spot of reading based on the author make the story seem down to earth, rather than overwhelmed by the presence of royalty. The Queen herself becomes a likable and relatable character.
However, this is a book that might require occasional use of a dictionary to get the full effect; still, the context does not exclude the passive reader. “Equerry” is a popular word in the book for example, but discerning that it means someone who waits on the royal family is not difficult. Other words such as “Antipodean” on the other hand are present, but not crucial to the humor or events; they serve more to set the mood.
In a similar fashion, there are specific literary references: “not unlike Miss Havisham’s wedding feast … and Sir Kevin as Mr [stet] Pip.” Not that these descriptions are crucial to the goings-on, but being familiar with Dickens’ Great Expectations does provide another level of understanding. What makes some of these moments more fantastic are the modern literary references that include the likes of Harry Potter and how the Queen is “saving that for a rainy day.”
A more striking undercurrent of the novel involves begging the question of what literature really offers its readers; “books, which, whatever else they might be, were just a reflection of the world … She had seen the real thing.” This theme lends an unexpected sincerity to the story. As the Queen wonders why books matter, so does the reader and a bond is formed that leads to exploration of a very important question: why read? And these sorts of questions are a consistent element throughout the story.
The strongest running theme in the book is of self-discovery. There is an unexplored side to people that we can often only find in books, and in the Queen’s case this is exceptionally true. In her role as monarch for over fifty years, she has always been separate from the populace, and as she reads she begins to notice nuances about people that never occurred to her before. What begin as annoyances with writing that focuses on social diversity—something that from her station is hard to grasp—develop into delicate perceptions of the ways in which people say things without speaking a word. The Queen gradually transforms from beginning to end because of her reaction to avid reading. Looking back to the beginning of the book, the reader will find a very different woman than at the end.
A second, yet equally resonating theme, revolves around the Queen’s age. Often people wonder why at her age she bothers to take to reading so strongly. There is a powerful message about how old age should not be considered a downhill existence. The Queen’s eightieth birthday is celebrated at the end of the book, and she is still interested in taking on new activities and exploring what life still holds for her. She has seen more of the world than most people can imagine, and met more dignitaries and notable persons than perhaps anyone in the world. With all we have done, there is always something else, and we should not be afraid as not to seek it out.
Grisham Breaks from Law to Turn On the Game in Italy
Third string quarterbacks in the NFL tend to be shuffled from team to team unnoticed by most fans. This was the life of Rick Dockery, a good living with little fame, and then he made history—in a bad way. The Cleveland Browns with a shot at victory send Rick onto the field when the other two quarterbacks end up injured. Almost guaranteed a win, it should be simple tidying up. After three interceptions however, the game is lost, and Rick becomes known as the greatest goat in NFL history with little to no chance of ever playing again. Fortunately for him, there is an unknown NFL in Italy, and there is a team willing to pay him to play. But that is just the beginning of John Grisham’s new novel Playing for Pizza.
Playing for Pizza is surprising in the simplicity of its storytelling. From Grisham’s law novels we expect him to be a writer with deep-seeded meaning and underlying plot twists, and while this work is not readily predictable, it leaves its themes up to the reader to amplify or reduce. Loyalty, love, friendship, dedication, and many other classic concepts present themselves, but they are in the course of Rick Dockery’s season playing football and living life amongst the profound culture of Italy. They are not drudged up and thrown in to make the writing seem more academic or of a higher literary quality, but rather, they occur naturally in the course of a man’s life. This is significant because in reading, the reader is given that coveted chance to simply enjoy a story.
Coinciding with that, the writing style is clear and typically succinct; it provides the essential details and elaborates on the aspects that the reader would not be readily familiar with. And the story itself, although essentially straightforward, makes detours along the way that keep the reading interesting without being a burden. This obviously makes for a truly enjoyable read.
Still, there are some drawbacks to Grisham’s simplistic style. Occasionally, the reader may very well feel as if they are missing something. The book feels like there should be a more pronounced thesis, while instead the text suggests a vague idea about a person finding their place in life. This insubstantial notion becomes more revelatory towards the end of the book, giving the much desired closure, but elements of doubt are bound to creep in.
Redeeming this is Rick Dockery’s fantastic character, if only because he is very human. Rick is not the epitome of virtue or evil—he is muddled up somewhere in between. Sure, people often discuss how the imperfections of such and such a character lend to the realism and strength of a story, but regularly, those flaws become the sole focus of the book. Rick may do something that the reader will find disagreeable, but that transgression does not become the focus of what is happening. Like the themes, the details that make Rick real are allowed to blossom in the undercurrent of the story, which keeps the book moving and realistic in a way that is notably uncommon. The unity that this creates in the novel is the true genius of the work. Life is shown as a series of moments, some more memorable than others, that blend together seamlessly and overlap. This technique is so effective that sometimes when Rick remembers something that happened earlier, it genuinely feels like a memory.
Playing for Pizza is not the fast-paced thriller or the carefully constructed psychological mind game that can be found in much of Grisham’s other writing. Instead, he tells an interesting, believable story in a straightforward fashion. What results, is an enjoyable book that the reader can connect to while buried within the pages. It’s not hard to put down, but it is easy to pick up, and Italy is a welcome change of pace.
Some New Dialogue from the Hazardous Story
Here’s just a snippet of dialogue from my new novel project.
The front door to the house burst open as Elias came bounding in. “Be careful with that door sweetie,” he heard his mother say from the next room. “Opening it like that is hard on the hinges.”
“Hey mom,” Elias started, after he had followed her voice into the room.
“Yes, dear?” she responded, as she looked up from folding clothes.
“Why don’t you smoke?” he asked.
“Why do you ask?”
“Because dad does.”
“Well, I wouldn’t want the inside of the house to look like the inside of that shed.”
“You could open a window,” Elias suggested.
“Even if you closed down the smithy, it’d still smell like someone had been making horseshoes,” she replied. Elias didn’t bother to ask what she meant.
“Okay…” he trailed off.
“Besides, smoking is for men,” she concluded.
New Combo–Poetry and Dance
So, a friend of mine decided that it’d be a fun project to try and combine poetry and dance. There are dancers from the neighboring college as well as my college, and poets from my college, including myself. I allowed my friend to select two old poems she thought would work for the project, and from there I’ve merged them together with the hopes that along with some choreography the poetry will come back with a bang. I was skeptical at first, but since talking with the dancer I’m working with about some ideas, I feel much better about the project. So, no, I’m not getting class credit, but it should be a ball.
“Colors of Liberty”
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Kim Writes on the Right to Destroy
The name of the game is clients. Everywhere the nameless narrator goes he searches for potential clients. The music he listens to, the art he examines, and the magazines he reads all help him learn what his clients’ current tastes could be. But he is not a personal stylist or a lawyer seeking to bolster his clientele. We would call him sinister; although, the glimpses we catch of him throughout the book make him seem sincere. In Korean author Young-Ha Kim’s (translator Chi-Young Kim) novel I Have the Right Destroy Myself, the narrator who frames the story instructs those interested in doing just that—destroying themselves. He seeks out his clients, and although it seems obvious to him who might be unknowingly in search of his services, the reader is never entirely enveloped in that mindset.
The book is a quick read at around 120 pages, but it leaves much to be desired. The aforementioned narrator has a section at the beginning and end of the story, but only appears briefly in the midst of the text. He does not even narrate the major body of the work, which involves two brothers K and C, who fall in love with the same girl, Se-yeon. Se-yeon does have contact with the mysterious narrator, but that is about the extent of it. The idea is that the book was anonymously written by the narrator, which makes sense, but it does not feel very strongly woven into the central story.
The first two-thirds of the novel feel a lot like a young adult, teen thriller, which for the most part it is. However, towards the end the symbolism ties in and a strong theme develops. In this respect, the book was very effective, and the end of the book was a much more enjoyable read than the outset.
What would seem the all-important theme of suicide is overridden by a plot that seems to be trying too hard to be original. And in fact it is. The storyline that lies underneath everything going on is very interesting with strongly sexual imagery and strange moments that highlight ideas of truth and love. It is a good story, but the direction it tries to go in seems questionable. The path of the story does not feel like a stretch, but rather, it is emphasized at the beginning, like a thesis statement, and then it fails to live up to its own goal. It does not fail to produce a worthwhile read; however, there are too many questions left unanswered, which the reader would reasonably expect to have at least more of a solid grasp on.
The writing style itself seems generic, but this may simply be a result of the translation. So while it will not be boring, do not expect exceedingly clever wordplay.
The characters are original, although confusing at times. They come across as more realistic simply by the virtue that they are sometimes very clearheaded, but other times hard to understand. They make sense in a way that is similar to the ways in which we relate to real people.
All throughout a very strange, multilayered story is woven effectively and deliberately. Still, the question lies with whether or not much of the deliberation was given as to how to the theme of self-destruction is consistent and growing in the novel. Rather, it seems that Young-Ha Kim uses the first two-thirds of the book to establish his premises and then in the final third allows his work to make its big thematic debut. So, the book does provide some thrills and chills while exploring new variations on a fairly taboo theme, but it still leaves a lot to be desired. It is easy to see how much more this book could have done, and it is still worth looking into to see just how much it does do.
I Have the Right to Destroy Myself is the perfect novel for an era where we are in constant debate over what rights we do and do not have, as well as what rights we are denied.
More Hazards
Well, I’ve been revising my work on Hazardous, as well as expanding upon what I already had. It’s going rather slowly, but I’m happy with what I’m producing, so it’s okay for now. In the future, I may need to pick up the pace, however. This is a little bit that comes after what I already posted–I figured I wouldn’t bother with reposting the edited version of the initial segment.
“That’s a good one, ey Hodge,” Ozzie said and then continued to laugh.
“You betchur arse,” Hodge replied. He suddenly came to the realization that he was not happy that Ozzie was also enjoying his joke. And he decided he was going to wipe the smile from Ozzie’s face.
Sawmouth Hodge flung himself forward like a tiger springing on its prey. Only he lacked any finesse and flailed wildly as he flew through the air. Easy Ozzie sat back and raised a foot, but he wasn’t fast enough. Hodge slammed down into Ozzie’s chest, pinning him. Ozzie tried to roll away, but he couldn’t shake off Hodge. McManus was down the steps in a flash, and before Hodge was even able to raise his fist again, the broad-chested bartender had hold of his arm. Hodge continued to struggle and tried to kick, so McManus broke three of his fingers. They all snapped in unison and were followed by a deafening cry of horror and pain. Elias could clearly see the bones beneath the skin making little tents around the joints.
When the hollering had subsided, Hodge continued to whimper, and Ozzie was too stunned to struggle to his feet. McManus let go of the broken fingers, and Hodge clutched his hand to his chest. “I thank ya bast be gettin home then,” Mr. McManus said to Elias. Elias nodded in agreement and headed off down the alley. Hodge and Ozzie quietly picked themselves up and headed off down separate side streets, while McManus went back inside his establishment, The Slaughtered Lamb.
Elias was now back up to speed, darting around corners with balance and precision. Much to the chagrin of his mother, he still managed to scuff the shoulders of his cloaks against every edge he came across.
New Hazardous Start
So, my computer crashed recently, and I lost the document with the novel I was working on: Hazardous. Still, I have started anew, and though this will strongly resemble the post “Somehow I Still Find the Time”, it is new and written from scratch (aside from a line or two towards the end of the brawl).
Hazardous
Elias stood on the outcropping, looking out as far as any eye could ever hope to see. The air tasted thin and brittle. He remembered the flavor.
And the burden of that old song,
It murmurs and whispers still:
“A boy’s will is the wind’s will,
And the thoughts of youth are long, long thoughts.”
—Longfellow, “My Lost Youth”
CHAPTER 1—THOUGHT AND MEMORY
Seeking leads to looking that leads to finding. Or does looking lead to seeking? Elias followed his feet through town wondering how he had started the day: seeking or looking. Eventually, he found himself standing on a rocky precipice overlooking a mountain of clouds. His eyes wandered from tuft to puff, searching for a speck of true black. There were, of course, shadows, but he wanted birds. A pair of blackbirds, he had been told, circled in the mists at the edge. He wasn’t sure if they were crows or ravens or some other kind of bird, but he knew they were black. However, for the umpteenth day in a row there were no flecks upon the clouds. Hurrying back through the town of Sawyer, Elias wound his way through alleys and side streets. All the while, he wondered if he were wanting or hoping. Or wishing.
“Wassa madder? Forgetchur a man, boy?” Sawmouth Hodge pressed his hand firmly against Easy Ozzie’s, trying to force it to lay flat on the table.
“What you…say?” Ozzie’s face was a simmering stew of veins shifting colors from fresh apple to overripe. The arm-wrestling match had begun as a peaceful means of settling their dispute, which was not about anything in particular. Easy Ozzie was always in an uproar, and Sawmouth Hodge was simply crass—their relationship was inevitable.
Ozzie’s hand was drifting downward, so he began to look for an out. Not thinking, he backhanded Hodge across the face, distracting him just long enough to slam his hand down onto the tabletop. Hodge responded by driving his fist into Ozzie’s mouth. Ozzie stuttered a curse through strings of blood and bits of teeth. Fortunately, Erik McManus, who ran the bar, had been fully aware that the little game of strength was only going to cause more problems and had been at the ready. Built like a chimney, he had no difficulty tossing the pair out the backdoor into a side alley.
They continued to tussle.
Hodge reached his hand back behind his head and swung forward with all his bodyweight in tow but only managed to catch Ozzie’s head with his gut. Reddened saliva wheezed from between Sawmouth Hodge’s lips as he recovered and dropped both his fists like hammers on Easy Ozzie’s back. They tumbled into the mud and mule manure, rolling around, tearing at clothes with fingernails, flashing teeth, curses turned to snarls, swinging wildly with desperation for any punch to find purchase. They finished a few feet apart, reclined—in the midst of a state of collapse—with aches in their gasping. Fresh blood dribbled down Easy Ozzie’s front, trickling from a split lower lip. Still, Ozzie smiled triumphantly at Hodge, whose left eye was already beginning to swell itself shut.
McManus poked his head out to make sure the pair hadn’t killed each other, but he wished aloud that they had. “Kintcha do a proper jeb un finish ech uther aff? Mebbeh wander oot ta tha edge un one a ya wid fal aff!” McManus’s accent had softened after twenty years of tending bar and managing an inn in Sawyer, at least a little bit. Then, someone coming down the street caught his eye and he called out, “Hey ho thar, Elyas!”
Elias wound his way down the narrow side street and replied, “Hey ho there, Mister McManus!” As he drew nearer he noticed the pair, beaten up on the ground. “Your work?” he asked.
“Nah. These twa been ah it fer a long time now. Easy Ozzie un Sawmouth Hodge. Every day, practicly, crack a dawn.” Listening to McManus, Elias started to skirt his way around the pair in the dirt. Unfortunately, there was no way around the stink.
“Hey waitaminute there boy,” Hodge said. “I got a joke fer ya.” Hodge grinned, his teeth slimed over with mud and still oozing blood. Elias looked to McManus, who simply shrugged. After waiting a moment to make sure Elias was going to stay and listen, Hodge continued, “What did the elephant say to the naked man?” He paused again, allowing time for a response, even though the question was rhetorical. “That’s nice but can ya breathe through it!” Ozzie burst out into a peal of laughter, and Sawmout Hodge followed shortly thereafter. It had to hurt for him to laugh so hard: a beer belly of blood sagged down from over his eye, covering it, and it shook violently like a turkey neck. Both had moist soil and crap sliding off of them.
My Reading Section: Just so You’re Aware
I just wanted to point out that with these reviews/opinions, I am writing as if I were talking to someone familiar with the material. Sometimes I write a real review, and sometimes it has a summary. I’m sort of jumping around I guess. I just wanted to say something about it in case anyone was curious as to a method to the madness, and I’m just saying right now: no, there isn’t. Maybe a review will help you to find a good read, or maybe it’ll give you a different idea about a book. I don’t know for certain until I sit down and write something–these are mostly my thoughts in whatever seems the most appropriate way to compile them at the time.